Monday 20 February 2017


Laughter is, when people laugh about something silly or just make ridiculous jokes, that’s what makes people laugh. Now, I’m going to tell you about what makes me laugh, well first off, I laugh when my friends talk about something hilarious and I just crack, I can’t help it, when they talk about something really funny. Is it just me, when I laugh I snort and then my friends laugh about it and then we all just laugh and it’s really funny when everyone laughs. Laughing makes me really happy because when I see someone laughing it means their happy.
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2 comments:

  1. 100wcbyfread.com23 February 2017 at 16:10

    Nice story, but I think you should
    -indent
    -double space
    -make your story in paragraphs
    -and you don't need a comma after the word "it"

    that's all also nice story.

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  2. Orange24 February 2017 at 13:10

    you should cut the length of your sentences by putting in periods.

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